Winners
Hello I'm back and I bring good news!!! I have read over every submission and have left my likes, dislikes, and constructive critiscim on each submission. At first it will be the winners, then the other of whom didn't place but still deserve thoughts on their piece. And afterwards it will be the prizes available for the winners.
On record, the submissions for this contest are the longest they've ever been. Last year I had an entire book submitted and yeah, I had to place rules on more than three part stories. All of your submissions were wonderful, it was hard placing you all.
1st Place:
kurokaito
Arrow Shot: Eustass Kidd x Reader
Let me say, you perfectly captured Kid's personality, he were aggressive yet easily amused. On top of that, your detail was through the roof phenomenal. Your opening description of Killer and how you said that Kid had a "delicious V-Line" was priceless. Of all your submissions in the past, this one was my favorite. Bravo!
2nd Place:
NdragonEyes
Fallen Petals of the Heart: Law x Reader
A perfect representation of the Hanahaki disease. You are right, Law is the perfect character to write this disease on. I'm also glad you pointed out (I'm really dense even for a writer😅) that Law is a rather unreadable character. While reading the One Piece Manga, I couldn't ever get a good feel on Law's personality because he's a 'just there' character half of the time but this factor about him makes me love him even more. Now in your story where Law was telling the Reader how he'd confess to his lover, it was a perfect execution cause your word choice made him come off as caring yet the need to keep a distance. You are a wizard when it comes to body language and emotion in your characters N, that's something I've noticed as I've read your works over the years. The reason why you didn't place first was because your description didn't compare to Kaito's.
3rd Place:
WintersxTemptress
Blue Moon Rising: Zoro x Werewolf Reader
Very very good plot work! Very interesting story that kept me reading up until the very end. I loved the concept of werewolves and the ability being a family passed trait. Except you have a few easy fixes. Zoro was a bit out of character but after going back in you fixed that problem for the most part. You could work on expanding your vocab, it won't hurt to use stronger words in your arsenal. And lastly, have you ever heard of 'every character exists for a reason'? In your story, you brought up Marco and Thatch but they never interacted or played a part in the story. Don't mention characters if they don't play a part.
You may find your prizes at the bottom of the final notes! DM me to claim your prize!
Final Notes: My notes are my likes, dislikes, and constructive advice for you to help you fix and realize where you could've done better to become a better writer. Constructive criticism is what shaped me into the writer I am today. If I upset you, let me know.
cakebellrockmuse
Love is Stronger than Any Metal Itself: Ace x Storm/OC
This Ace x OC REALLY reminded me of my 3 Part Ace x Reader named Iron Maiden that I made over a year ago. They both take place during the war with the same devil fruit. I can't tell if this was coincidence or you took inspiration from it. But one thing that really made your story hard to read was one of the biggest writing rules that you broke. Whenever someone new is speaking, start a new paragraph! This will make the story easier to read.
Lastly Id like to point out that a section within this piece had pictures that coexisted with a number of flashbacks was perfectly executed and made me feel like I'm in the actual anime and manga. Ive never seen this technique be used as well as you had done. Bravo👏
liliaicha1500
Aizawa x Reader x Todoroki
You have a problem with show vs tell. However when you brought up the Heather reference within this, I realized your story was in a diary format and was supposed to be more tell vs. Show. Almost your entire story was 'this happened and then this' and very little real time moments. You should've just picked out a select few scenes from the show and focussed on them, not the entire first and second season. Your story had a very good concept overall, just with the big abundance of information and events in your story, its better off as a chapter book where you can build up on your moments more. Like maybe in the beginning of each chapter, you have the diary entry and then the rest of the chapter focusses on the moment the entry talks about.
_CookieCrumbs_
Soft Mornings: Aizawa x Reader
In the very beginning you warned me that the piece was rushed and I could tell. There wasn't any problems besides the piece being very messy and harder to follow. However, your comic relief and relatable dialogue leads me to believe that this would in fact be a typical morning with our #1 Sleeping King.
Prizes!
1st Place: you get a request of any kind written from me for One Piece(Please keep away from Lemons for One Piece. They noticeably lack quality from me) or My Hero Academia.
AND
An artist request as well. It can be drawn in pen, marker(color or monochrome), or just pencil.
2nd Place: you get a request written from me for One Piece or My Hero Academia except you do not get a choice of lemon or ships and are stuck to the x Reader genre
OR
An artist request from me of any kind. Pen, marker, or pencil.
3rd Place: You get a written request from me for One Piece or My Hero Academia but no lemons or ships.
Art Prize Examples: All were created by me. 3 are Pen, 3 are Marker.






This was yet another fun contest! I dont plan to host another one for a long while but keep your eyes put for the next one! You all did such a good job!!!
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